tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8237661800206492812.post1627442114045649827..comments2023-05-07T08:13:13.713-07:00Comments on annie and katrin: on a bed of moss i bleedkatrinhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09549558632861568997noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8237661800206492812.post-68170833131967170282010-03-10T08:19:29.111-08:002010-03-10T08:19:29.111-08:00Maybe...I thought your poem powerful and on point,...Maybe...I thought your poem powerful and on point, thoroughly female. This morning in processing, my poem changed to this:<br /><br /><b>Moon Worship</b><br /><br />I receive my life<br />from the blood you shed for me<br />and give to the earth.<br /><br />I shall turn to fire<br />worship, blazing from the source,<br />then bathe in white snow<br />and wrap in the moss<br />from your bed, knowing at last<br />the truth of night's sky.christopherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04201537517464996231noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8237661800206492812.post-43928089924109529162010-03-10T07:54:15.691-08:002010-03-10T07:54:15.691-08:00tasteful you say, tribal. thanks for that.
I like ...tasteful you say, tribal. thanks for that.<br />I like your better, wiser, deeper. i say; i got the body, you got the words, i shed the blood, you give it meaning :)katrinhttp://www.anniekatrin.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8237661800206492812.post-6648488664626668942010-03-09T23:33:00.275-08:002010-03-09T23:33:00.275-08:00If you copy this poem, I changed "gave" ...If you copy this poem, I changed "gave" to "give".christopherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04201537517464996231noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8237661800206492812.post-76069104937371308562010-03-09T23:26:02.334-08:002010-03-09T23:26:02.334-08:00I had a really good poem and I lost it to blogger ...I had a really good poem and I lost it to blogger :( This is tastefully done, my friend. It feels tribal to me.<br /><br />Here's another. I hope it is as good.<br /><br /><b>Moon Worship</b><br /><br />I receive my life<br />from the blood you shed for me<br />and gave to the earth.<br /><br />I shall turn to fire,<br />worship blazing from the source,<br />then bathe in white snow<br />and wrap in the moss<br />of your bed, knowing at last<br />the truth of night's sky.christopherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04201537517464996231noreply@blogger.com