Friday, May 14, 2010

letting go

i turn my back on
certain thoughts
i face the other way
there's nothing there
not yet
everything i was is gone
everything i did
i did with you
everything i saw
i saw you
when i feel
i feel you


the sun the wind
they sweep in
great joy

i am learning love
without




it was a little tricky, but because it is Friday Flash 55, i shortened my writing. which is good
because
every word i write, ..... :)
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4 comments:

  1. g-manMay 14, 2010 at 1:04 PM

    It's only good to be shortened on Friday..:P
    Living in God's Country as you do, sure gives you lots of time for beautiful inspiration!
    Excellent 55
    Thank you so much for taking the time to contribute again today.
    Thanks for visiting, and have a Kick Ass Week-End...Galen

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  2. Brian MillerMay 14, 2010 at 6:56 PM

    nice 55...though sorrowful...so hard a lesson to learn...

    mine is up!

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  3. katrinMay 15, 2010 at 7:41 AM

    Thanks,
    Galen :P
    Brian indeed sorrowful, deeply so, but really
    really it is beautiful lesson.

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  4. JosMay 15, 2010 at 1:40 PM

    I love this. At the same time it saddens me so much. I have been here ... oh yes, foresaken. Learning to be without. To love / live without. Beautifully written Joz.

    xx Jos

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