Monday, January 17, 2011

sima sawme haiku

going up the lift
my head rests on your shoulder
ski fast to slow down
walking up the stairs
the smell of hotel carpets
me close behind you

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3 comments:

  1. Woman in a WindowJanuary 18, 2011 at 7:14 AM

    i think you look beautiful especially in that first shot.

    your second poem makes me a little sad. i'm glad for your happiness but the smell of hotel carpets makes me a little sad.

    xo
    erin

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  2. katrinJanuary 18, 2011 at 6:46 PM

    i know what you mean Erin, it didn't make me sad, but that very moment on the stairs exactly like that, made me very aware of what i am doing, very much because of the musty smell.

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  3. Steve IsaakJanuary 25, 2011 at 2:14 AM

    Good haikus, superb use of sensory info in the second one.

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